thanks for you advice kuroloki thanks for your compliment some of the work is mine but others i have to admit i copied that i will stop i tryed to do it in different styles of writing i see your point about the sentences i didnt pick that up so thankyou very much for that i will look at that website of blogs to get more tips thanks again

I don't think your blog is at all uninformative, but I think your writing style needs a little work to appeal to others. You have a lot of run-on sentences and large paragraphs, and that makes it difficult to read. Do you read other blogs regularly? Try to make a habit of this to get the hang of their writing styles, and just keep practicing and asking for advice. Check these out: http://paganblogproject.com/?page_i d=18

On another note, I noticed that the writing style on some of your posts is completely different. Are you writing these yourself, or are you pasting them from other sources? Copying others' writing is REALLY REALLY bad and makes people angry. It's a violation of their rights, so you shouldn't do that anymore. I'm REALLY sorry if they are actually your original writings and I'm just jumping to conclusions, though!

thankyou so much many blessings to you lady gulediskanahi

I submitted you to StumbleUpon, so hopefully you'll get better readership! I liked what I read though